EN340 / IN350 Global Haiku Tradition
Dr. Randy Brooks
Spring 2002
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Within Haiku

by
Erin Crow

I was born in Belleville, Illinois before moving to Chester, Illinois “Home of Popeye” ten years later. I am the youngest of three children, and at age twenty, am still referred to as the baby of the family. Writing has always been enjoyable, but haiku has been something new.

I was introduced to this genre during the Spring 2002 course, Global Haiku Traditions. Upon introduction, I became particularly fond of senryu in which humor is more prevalent. Too many issues are stressful so it is the little things that make life so enjoyable.

After reading many others’ work, including one my favorite authors, Alan Pizzarelli, I started to experiment with my own haiku. I do not necessarily try to put humor in my writing. Instead, I just wish to capture the exact moment and create the image, no matter how blunt the statements are. Besides humor, I enjoy writing about my childhood and growing up. The things we complained about the most while growing up are the things most laughed at now.

The haiku selected for this collection have all been written during the Spring 2002. I believe they best portray my style of humor and irony, while also sharing memories from my childhood in the Crow household.

 


yesterday I cried
you brought flowers
still unforgiven


long drive to Florida
stuck in the middle seat
numb butt


sweating in the snow
all eight layers
Mom insisted

 

 

Friday night
popcorn and a movie
just me and Dad


Mom's Girl

Although I’m closer to him now, I was never Daddy’s girl growing up. Instead, I was my mother’s shadow. I couldn’t do anything without telling her every delicate detail.

Staying the night at friends’ houses was never a huge deal but deep down I was scared out of my mind and somewhat sad because I thought my mom would be missing out. Geez, I don’t know why a middle aged woman wouldn’t enjoy a 1st grade slumber party! She has a very unique way of making everyone feel so special and so loved. Thus, I felt guilty that I got to out and have fun while she had to stay home and clean and whatnot. I remember going to one particular slumber party. They had an activity of painting t-shirts. They had so many fun colors. I didn’t have my mom there though to see all these vibrant colors and my, my, she would be missing out on so much if she didn’t see each and every single one of these paints. So, what did I do? Well, I made a giant rainbow on my shirt just so I wouldn’t feel guilty for leaving her out. It sounds so ridiculous to me now, but at the time, it seemed like a great idea.

My mom has been my strength and my support for so long. I never fear telling her anything, unless I think she’ll be disappointed in me. She’s somewhat naive but has become more “cultured” as her kids have gotten older. Through the years, I got irritated at her for being so naive. She was not the most in-style mother. She didn’t drive a fun car, nor did she drive fast enough. After getting irritated with her, I would get irritated with myself for getting irritated at such a softhearted, mild tempered woman. So, as you can see, it was a lose lose situation. All my little irritations really amount to about nothing in the whole spectrum. Sometimes they say we are harshest to the ones we love most. I don’t know why this is and I do hate it, but sometimes it proves true.

                    getting ready for work
                    Mom and I in the mirror
                    I fix my hair      and hers

 

rainy night
middle of the night
dogs bark louder


Friday night
popcorn and a movie
just me and Dad

 


Bert’s Auto Service

During the summers of my high school years, I worked for my next door neighbor at his mechanic shop. It was a small town shop with the name Bert’s Auto Service. The customers had mostly been customers for life as had been their parents. They were loyal and understanding if problems ever arose.

The physical appearance of the shop is nothing spectacular but goodness how I love it. When you enter the front door, you see blue walls lined with an antique car wallpaper border that I hung a few summers ago. Lining the shelves are old plaques and certificates that have been faded by the sun beaming in through the matching mini-blinds. As you leave the office, you see the actual garage. The walls are lined with cabinets and shelves of tires, filters, and gauges.

The parking lot usually looks like a used car lot because it is always packed. There is a constant flow of cars in and out. Most of them need work, but sometimes you’ll get your regulars that just like to stop by and shoot the bull. My favorite part about the shop is the people. You have to be quick and witty to be able to keep up with the boys. You get poked fun at for everything you do, but you always have your eyes alert to be able to throw it back at someone else. It’s all in good humor, and I know that any one of those guys would be there for me.

                    no glamorous signs
                    dusty shelves—
                    customers' top choice

 


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