EN340
/ IN350 Global Haiku Tradition
Dr. Randy Brooks
Spring 2002 |
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Within
Haiku
by
Erin
Crow
I
was born in Belleville, Illinois before moving to Chester,
Illinois Home of Popeye ten years later. I am
the youngest of three children, and at age twenty, am still
referred to as the baby of the family. Writing has always
been enjoyable, but haiku has been something new.
I
was introduced to this genre during the Spring 2002 course,
Global Haiku Traditions. Upon introduction, I became particularly
fond of senryu in which humor is more prevalent. Too many
issues are stressful so it is the little things that make
life so enjoyable.
After
reading many others work, including one my favorite
authors, Alan Pizzarelli, I started to experiment with my
own haiku. I do not necessarily try to put humor in my writing.
Instead, I just wish to capture the exact moment and create
the image, no matter how blunt the statements are. Besides
humor, I enjoy writing about my childhood and growing up.
The things we complained about the most while growing up are
the things most laughed at now.
The
haiku selected for this collection have all been written during
the Spring 2002. I believe they best portray my style of humor
and irony, while also sharing memories from my childhood in
the Crow household.
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yesterday
I cried
you brought flowers
still unforgiven
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long
drive to Florida
stuck in the middle seat
numb butt
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sweating
in the snow
all eight layers
Mom insisted
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Friday
night
popcorn and a movie
just me and Dad
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Mom's
Girl
Although
Im closer to him now,
I was never Daddys girl
growing up. Instead, I was my
mothers shadow. I couldnt
do anything without telling
her every delicate detail.
Staying
the night at friends houses
was never a huge deal but deep
down I was scared out of my
mind and somewhat sad because
I thought my mom would be missing
out. Geez, I dont know
why a middle aged woman wouldnt
enjoy a 1st grade slumber party!
She has a very unique way of
making everyone feel so special
and so loved. Thus, I felt guilty
that I got to out and have fun
while she had to stay home and
clean and whatnot. I remember
going to one particular slumber
party. They had an activity
of painting t-shirts. They had
so many fun colors. I didnt
have my mom there though to
see all these vibrant colors
and my, my, she would be missing
out on so much if she didnt
see each and every single one
of these paints. So, what did
I do? Well, I made a giant rainbow
on my shirt just so I wouldnt
feel guilty for leaving her
out. It sounds so ridiculous
to me now, but at the time,
it seemed like a great idea.
My
mom has been my strength and
my support for so long. I never
fear telling her anything, unless
I think shell be disappointed
in me. Shes somewhat naive
but has become more cultured
as her kids have gotten older.
Through the years, I got irritated
at her for being so naive. She
was not the most in-style mother.
She didnt drive a fun
car, nor did she drive fast
enough. After getting irritated
with her, I would get irritated
with myself for getting irritated
at such a softhearted, mild
tempered woman. So, as you can
see, it was a lose lose situation.
All my little irritations really
amount to about nothing in the
whole spectrum. Sometimes they
say we are harshest to the ones
we love most. I dont know
why this is and I do hate it,
but sometimes it proves true.
getting
ready for work
Mom
and I in the mirror
I
fix my hair and
hers
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rainy
night
middle of the night
dogs bark louder
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Friday
night
popcorn and a movie
just me and Dad
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Berts
Auto Service
During
the summers of my high
school years, I worked
for my next door neighbor
at his mechanic shop.
It was a small town
shop with the name Berts
Auto Service. The customers
had mostly been customers
for life as had been
their parents. They
were loyal and understanding
if problems ever arose.
The
physical appearance
of the shop is nothing
spectacular but goodness
how I love it. When
you enter the front
door, you see blue walls
lined with an antique
car wallpaper border
that I hung a few summers
ago. Lining the shelves
are old plaques and
certificates that have
been faded by the sun
beaming in through the
matching mini-blinds.
As you leave the office,
you see the actual garage.
The walls are lined
with cabinets and shelves
of tires, filters, and
gauges.
The
parking lot usually
looks like a used car
lot because it is always
packed. There is a constant
flow of cars in and
out. Most of them need
work, but sometimes
youll get your
regulars that just like
to stop by and shoot
the bull. My favorite
part about the shop
is the people. You have
to be quick and witty
to be able to keep up
with the boys. You get
poked fun at for everything
you do, but you always
have your eyes alert
to be able to throw
it back at someone else.
Its all in good
humor, and I know that
any one of those guys
would be there for me.
no
glamorous signs
dusty
shelves
customers'
top choice
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©2002
Randy Brooks, Millikin University, Decatur, Illinois || all rights reserved
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